10 Pounds

Written by thefreedomof

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i lost 10 pounds when you left me

my shirts fit better than ever

my waist is back to a 32

i’ve never found myself so beautiful

who would have known you only weighed 10 pounds

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“10 Pounds”

9 thoughts on “10 Pounds”

rapsədē blü says:

August 6, 2017 at 5:27 am

Love this! Simple and powerful.

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Raven says:

August 6, 2017 at 4:36 pm

Says it all, perfectly

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michaeljordahl says:

August 7, 2017 at 12:57 pm

Good one!

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BookOfPain says:

August 21, 2017 at 6:13 pm

Excellent! Excellent! Excellent!

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1. thefreedomof says:
  
  August 22, 2017 at 4:45 am
  
  Thanks! Thanks! Thanks!
  
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bastiankate says:

August 22, 2017 at 5:04 am

Woah! This is awesome!!

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Frederick Ostrovskis-Wilkes says:

August 22, 2017 at 11:28 am

Positivity is key – great poem

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respectmyselfblog says:

August 22, 2017 at 2:46 pm

I burst out laughing at the twist of irony. I LOVE this! It sounds just like the release after the end of a relationship gone bad. Excellent post.

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1. thefreedomof says:
  
  August 22, 2017 at 4:14 pm
  
  Thank you so much.
  
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